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Adonis Posted 22 years ago
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In recent ten years, few people in taiwan overly have been felling trees, such as padauk,mangrove for the sake of earning their private profits that have ruined the luxuriant forest once.

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Hello, In recent ten years, Choose either In recent years, or the last decade or the last ten years. few people in taiwan Taiwan. This is a proper noun and needs a capital letter.

  • Hello, In recent ten years, Choose either In recent years, or the last decade or the last ten years.
  • few people in taiwan Taiwan.
  • This is a proper noun and needs a capital letter.
  • overly have been felling trees, have been felling too many trees, or have been over-harvesting trees, or have been intensively/overly logging trees.
  • The problem is really the word order.
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Hello,

In recent ten years, Choose either In recent years, or the last decade or the last ten years.

few people in taiwan Taiwan. This is a proper noun and needs a capital letter.

overly have been felling trees, have been felling too many trees, or have been over-harvesting trees, or have been intensively/overly logging trees. The problem is real

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