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Exodejavu Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
About narrative effect (only a sentence)
Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an unnoticeable manner.
Given this background information, which sentence among the following will cause a tense effect?
a) I gasped unnoticeably.
b) I gasped, unnoticeably.
c) I gasped. Unnoticeably.
Thank you.
Best Wishes,
Given this background information, which sentence among the following will cause a tense effect?
a) I gasped unnoticeably.
b) I gasped, unnoticeably.
c) I gasped. Unnoticeably.
Thank you.
Best Wishes,
Top answer
Hi, Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an unnoticeable manner.
- Hi, Someone hawked his goods to me on the street.
- I picked one.
- Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an unnoticeable manner.
- This is not written in a very natural way.
- Given this background information, which sentence among the following will cause a tense effect?
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Hi,
Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an unnoticeable manner. This is not written in a very natural way.
Given this background information, which sentence among the following will cause a tense effect?
I don't know what you mean by 'a tense effect'.
a) I gasped unnoti
Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an unnoticeable manner. This is not written in a very natural way.
Given this background information, which sentence among the following will cause a tense effect?
I don't know what you mean by 'a tense effect'.
a) I gasped unnoti
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[Words in gray are what I wrote in the original post;
words in blue are what Clive wrote in his above reply.]
>> Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an
>> unnoticeable manner.
words in blue are what Clive wrote in his above reply.]
>> Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an
>> unnoticeable manner.
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Hi again,
[Words in gray are what I wrote in the original post;
words in blue are what Clive wrote in his above reply.]
>> Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an
>> unnoticeable manner.
> This is not written in a very natural way.
Ah, which pa
[Words in gray are what I wrote in the original post;
words in blue are what Clive wrote in his above reply.]
>> Someone hawked his goods to me on the street. I picked one. Upon hearing the rip-off price, I gasped in an
>> unnoticeable manner.
> This is not written in a very natural way.
Ah, which pa
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