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Dodoro Posted 21 years ago
Dear Friend
This is my writting in below..
I need you to correct my English wrong.
I deem it will be improve my English power..
when you free..read it about my writing. thanks again.
lately.I had make a big decision. that is I quit my job.
and do something I like. For my part..this is need a big courage.
I didn’t know It will be success or failure.
But when people have(got) some age.I feel I should to do something as long as I like.
hereafter..It seem to didn’t have chace to do that. I still trust some words.
If you do.you will get a chance...but I doubt.Why I didn’t use that on girl for making friend..
Return to the subject.For my part,at this quit on job is a invest..I thought that is a big invest.
I will make materiality of the mony input turn to immateriality of the knowlage input.
I trust the knowledge input can make me better in the future.
So.since this time i will be trying to change myself.
lifestyle or learning presence..transform myself into a "Super Saiya“.
indeed..I take a lot of people’s blessing to leave.
At here.Thanks so much guys.
and the friends helping to me..thanks.
Grammar
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Dear Friend
This is my writting in below..
I need you to correct my English wrong.
I deem it will be improve my English power..
when you free..read it about my writing. thanks again.
below
===lately.I had make a big decision. that is I quit my job.
and do something I like. For my part..this is need a big courage.
I didn’t know It will be success or failure.
But when people have(got) some age.I feel I should to do something as long as I like.
hereafter..It seem to didn’t have chace to do that. I still trust some words.
If you do.you will get a chance...but I doubt.Why I didn’t use that on girl for making friend..
Return to the subject.For my part,at this quit on job is a invest..I thought that is a big invest.
I will make materiality of the mony input turn to immateriality of the knowlage input.
I trust the knowledge input can make me better in the future.
So.since this time i will be trying to change myself.
lifestyle or learning presence..transform myself into a "Super Saiya“.
indeed..I take a lot of people’s blessing to leave.
At here.Thanks so much guys.
and the friends helping to me..thanks.
Top answer
Hello Dodoro My try is like below. But I'm quite certain whether this is good English or not. I hope someone will correct it.
- Hello Dodoro My try is like below.
- But I'm quite certain whether this is good English or not.
- I hope someone will correct it.
- Lately I have made a big decision.
- That is, I will quit my present job to do what I like to do.
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Hello Dodoro
My try is like below. But I'm quite certain whether this is good English or not. I hope someone will correct it.
Lately I have made a big decision. That is, I will quit my present job to do what I like to do. For me, this decision needed a big courage. I don’t know whether it will end in success or failure. I believe one should do what they lik
My try is like below. But I'm quite certain whether this is good English or not. I hope someone will correct it.
Lately I have made a big decision. That is, I will quit my present job to do what I like to do. For me, this decision needed a big courage. I don’t know whether it will end in success or failure. I believe one should do what they lik
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Hi..thanks for your reply..But..I feel My English not good enough.
because..I am already quit my job and write this note..
because..I am already quit my job and write this note..
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