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Chiara Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
About mobile phones (cae)
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00 Hello, I'm trying to improve my writing skills. Could you please check this essay for me? 02 br
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00 A technology magazine, 01 i 00 International Technology Today 02 i 00 , has asked its readers to submit articles on the impact of mobile phones on modern society. In your article, you should discuss the different personal and business uses of mobile phones and assess the advantages and disadvantages of this technology. (250 words) 02 br
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00 The impact of mobile phone on modern society has been very strong. 02 br
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00 Sooner or later, its use has sprout in every country and nowadays, that some time has passed by from its very first appearance, we can state that it has definitely become part of our everyday life. 02 br
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00 Not only adults own a mobile phone, but also many children and old people. 02 br
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00 The reason for which it has become an habit for most of us, it’s quite easy to say, if we think to all its important advantages. 02 br
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00 In fact whatever the aim of our call is, business – as organizing a meeting, calling a colleague or our company boss- or personal - as talking to our family and friends, asking for help in a situation of urgent need or danger where it might also safe our life- we can contact swiftly anybody from almost everywhere. 02 br
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00 Nevertheless, among these great advantages, we can also point out some negative sides. 02 br
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00 First of all some people seem to be dependent on it. Their telephone never stops ringing and as soon as they find themselves alone, they start calling, sanding messages, playing with it, just to escape from their solitude, as if they could find in their mobile phone a sense they don’t find in everyday life. 02 br
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00 Moreover its use is so large and common that sometime we can hardly defend our need for privacy and our right do what we want without anybody knowing. 02 br
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00 Of course, as any other human invention, mobile phone has its advantages and disadvantages, but the better we can get from it,only depends on our awareness and personal discipline. 02 br
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00 Hello, I'm trying to improve my writing skills. Could you please check this essay for me? 02 br
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00 I also sent another one a week ago or so. If you ever have time and have a look... 02 br
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00 I would really appreciate it. 02 br
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00 Thank you so much, anyway. 02 br
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00 Chiara 02 br
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00 A technology magazine, 01 i 00 International Technology Today 02 i 00 , has asked its readers to submit articles on the impact of mobile phones on modern society. In your article, you should discuss the different personal and business uses of mobile phones and assess the advantages and disadvantages of this technology. (250 words) 02 br
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00 The impact of mobile phone on modern society has been very strong. 02 br
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00 Sooner or later, its use has sprout in every country and nowadays, that some time has passed by from its very first appearance, we can state that it has definitely become part of our everyday life. 02 br
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00 The reason for which it has become an habit for most of us, it’s quite easy to say, if we think to all its important advantages. 02 br
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00 In fact whatever the aim of our call is, business – as organizing a meeting, calling a colleague or our company boss- or personal - as talking to our family and friends, asking for help in a situation of urgent need or danger where it might also safe our life- we can contact swiftly anybody from almost everywhere. 02 br
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00 Nevertheless, among these great advantages, we can also point out some negative sides. 02 br
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00 First of all some people seem to be dependent on it. Their telephone never stops ringing and as soon as they find themselves alone, they start calling, sanding messages, playing with it, just to escape from their solitude, as if they could find in their mobile phone a sense they don’t find in everyday life. 02 br
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00 Moreover its use is so large and common that sometime we can hardly defend our need for privacy and our right do what we want without anybody knowing. 02 br
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00 Of course, as any other human invention, mobile phone has its advantages and disadvantages, but the better we can get from it,only depends on our awareness and personal discipline. 02 br
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0 i think you have one misstake with sanding messeges not sanding but sending 05 0 010id 5
- 0 i think you have one misstake with sanding messeges not sanding but sending 05 0 010id 5
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0 i think you have one misstake with sanding messeges not sanding but sending 05 0 010id 5
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0 Thank you, you are perfectly right! But I think there are more... 02 br
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0 Hello chiara 02 br
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00 i think there is a problem in second last line"our right do...." dont u think so there is something which should be inserted. 02 br
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00 i think there is a problem in second last line"our right do...." dont u think so there is something which should be inserted. 02 br
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0 To anonymous: Yes... "our right to..." 02 br
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00 To Feebs: thank you so much for checking my essay. As I can see it will be very hard to pass the writing test for me... I knew it, but I'll try in any case. 02 br
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00 I have only this question, i f you can answer to me. 02 br
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00 Is the following sentence wrong because I'm obliged in
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00 To Feebs: thank you so much for checking my essay. As I can see it will be very hard to pass the writing test for me... I knew it, but I'll try in any case. 02 br
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00 I have only this question, i f you can answer to me. 02 br
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0 01 font 00 It is quite easy to say why it 02 font 00 has become 01 font 00 a 02 font 00 habit for most of us 01 del 00 , 02 br
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02 del 00 You can indeed use this phrase here. It works well. 02 br
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0 Hello Feebs, thanks for your nice words. 02 br
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00 About that sentence: yes, that's what I was asking. I was wandering if in the original writing the sentence was wrong because it was in the midlle of the sentnce. 02 br
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00 Chiara 0-
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00 About that sentence: yes, that's what I was asking. I was wandering if in the original writing the sentence was wrong because it was in the midlle of the sentnce. 02 br
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00 Thanks again, 02 br
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