about metaphysic and spirtualism

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There has been a question among people from long time ago, that is there any truth about

metaphysics and spiritualism. More or less there are people who regard stuff such as fortune telling, palm reading, voodoo, and concept of magic and amulet as a truth. But on the other side there is who strongly deplore these issues. They can’t find it convincing and even poke fun at the people who are stick at it.



Knowing about future has always been interesting, so palm reading in terms of its ability to predict the future could be fascinating. You might see people who are willing to spend a lot of money to become aware of their future .as an example, I heard in the news, a 32 years old woman in Texas gives a vast of money to a palmist to find her husband, that went out on a ship in a stormy day and never came back, but at last nothing was concluded. Besides there are people trying to avoid misfortunes in future therefore they take refuge to some of these methods such as spiritualism to protect themselves against unpleasant incidents. according to A.P.A(American psychological administration) official statistics near to 15% of American society have complete confidence in metaphysics.so they try to connect to the world beyond via mediators with superhuman power.At last there is a number of people who follow the others beliefs .as a result they trust in these issues.I remember one of my neighbors who said once his father sees a jinni in his garden path and after say praying. it disappears suddenly.

Then he thinks there must be ghost and elf all around of us.



The second group who are critically against these matters, reckon it is just superstition and science rejects the subject.in this case they believe that there is no superiority over human beings.they argue only illiterate people might accept the existence of ghost and spiritualism. in addition some other say acceptance of these peculiar things is a way to escape from reality.for example you might see girls who are longing for a rich, chiseled and handsome suitor squander lots of money to hear from a palm reader in future they would find a good husband. Furthermore there are people who might not believe in such thing but prefer to entertain themselves by palm reader’s predictions or talking to their ancestors spirits.