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I am a student, and my father is a principal of the high school Where I am studying at. Today I have a lesson Which talks about Vietnam, and I am very excited about this. I learn many new things through this lesson, but I realized some quiet students do not think like me. Some students are truant in my classroom. It’s too shameful, is not it? I am a good student, and I want in the future I will to be a good person Who can help and take care of my family, so I do not do this breach work. After the day, I came back home with my father. On this night, I take a shower, eat dinner, and do the exercises Which my teacher gives me in the morning. It takes me two hours to finish it, but during two hours I still spend 15 to 30 minutes for my break time. I have to study hard because I do not want to make my family feels sad and disappointed, so I have to create my target That gets a high score in the History examination next week. If I can get this, my family especially my father Who is a principal of my school is very cheerful.

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I am a student, and my father is the principal of the high school Where (incorrect capitalization. "where" is not a proper noun or adjective. It is not the first word of a sentence. ) I am studying at. (wrong usage) Today I have a lesson Which (incorrect capitalization. "which" is not a proper noun or adjective. It is not the first word of a sentence. ) talks about Vietnam, and I am very excited about this. I will learn many new things from ~~through~~ this lesson, but I realized some quiet students do not think like me. Some students are truant (wrong word) in my classroom. It’s ~~too~~ shameful, is ~~not it~~? (wrong word order. There are two options: 1: "isn't it" and 2: "is it not" The second is very formal.) I am a good student, and I want ~~in the future I will to be~~ (Bad English) to be a good person Who (incorrect capitalization. "who" is not a proper noun or adjective. It is not the first word of a sentence. ) can help and take care of my family, so I do not do this breach (wrong word) work. ~~After the day, I came~~ (wrong tense) After the school day is over, I will come back home with my father. ~~On this night,~~ I will take a shower, eat dinner, and do the exercises Which (incorrect capitalization. "which" is not a proper noun or adjective. It is not the first word of a sentence. ) my teacher gave ~~gives~~ me in the morning. It ~~takes~~ will take me two hours to finish it, but ~~during two hours~~ I ~~still spend~~ will take a 15 to 30 minute break. ~~s for my break time~~. I have to study hard because I do not want to make my family ~~feels~~ (wrong form) feel sad and disappointed, so I have to create my target That (incorrect capitalization. "that" is not a proper noun or adjective. It is not the first word of a sentence. ) gets a high score in the History examination next week. If I can get this, my family especially my father Who (incorrect capitalization. "who" is not a proper noun or adjective. It is not the first word of a sentence. ) is a principal of my school will be is very cheerful.

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