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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

ABOUT ME

Hi Dear,
I wanted some help in creating a high profile website to convey the fact that I handle large sized GREEN POWER PROJECTS with high net worth. I have a mixed background and travelled around the world and successfully traded in mines (which is not relevant to the Green Power); I have also established my own show case of Green Power Manufacturing in India. I have written a small brief about myself and kindly help me re-word the profile (if you can), thanking you in advance....----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I, Viswa Garuda; with a Bachelors in Engg. and MBA from Melbourne Uni. have travelled the world extensively am now a US citizen and am trying to contribute towards the Green Power Industry.
I and my associates have worked in variegated fields from Structural Detailing to implementing several Cell Towers in New York City for prestigious clients like Verizon, AT&T and NEXTEL. Some of the prestigious projects that were done include,
• Museum of Modern Arts, New York City,
• 7 World Trade Center (one level),
• Bloomingdales, NYC, NY.

My exposure in the Steel business led me into procurement of Steel and minerals. And that gave me opportunities to explore into mines, for which I travelled most of South America scouting for opportunities for my clients. I became successful in trading with mining concessions.
With the turn of events in the global economic boom and subsequent melt down led me into the Bio-Diesel industry and I quickly upgraded my skills in the green energy sector and ever since been working in promoting Green Power Technologies world over.
With combined experience of over 30 years in the Green Power Industry I have established a factory in India to show case the potential of agri-waste not to just create POWER but create several by-products that are successfully sold in the market.

I have also worked as a volunteer and also served as a trustee for the prestigious non-profit organisation, ISKCON in helping with mid-day meals for the most deserving school kids. “Helping others is being selfish- because you help yourself more and you grow spiritually”
  

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Anonymous Hi Dear, English does not involve using the word "Dear", like this. You should delete it.

  • Anonymous Hi Dear, English does not involve using the word "Dear", like this.
  • You should delete it.
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AnonymousHi Dear,
English does not involve using the word "Dear", like this. You should delete it.

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