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Here are my options, please help me with the following sentence to make it better:

Jacques Prevert (the poet) shows on spaces of human happiness that are still possible, the ones that are constantly being jeopardized by provincials (narrow-minded), clerics, militants and politicians.

or is it maybe better:

Jacques Prevert leads us to the still possible paths of human happines, the ones constantly jeopardized by provincials, clerics, militants and politicians.

I would appreciate any help on how to make this sentence to sound good. Thanks!

BarbaraPA · Accepted Answer

I don't understand what you mean by "shows on spaces."

Jacques Prevert shows us that human happiness is still possible, even when jeopardized by ... [the rest is okay].

Turnem · Answer

Hi thanks for your response, what do think about this please:

Jacques Prevert points out the spaces of human happiness that are still possible, the ones that are constantly being jeopardized by provincials (narrow-minded), clerics, militants and politicians.

Thanks

BarbaraPA · Answer

No, I can't understand what you mean by "the spaces of human happiness."

Turnem · Answer

"the spaces of human happiness" or maybe like this

Prevert shows us that there is after all some room left for the human happiness in spite of the constant attacks by militants, clerics...

BarbaraPA · Answer

I"m sorry, I still don't understand what you mean. There is still room in our life for happiness?

Turnem · Answer

Yes, exactly - There is still room in our life for happiness. Despite the constant attacks on it from militants, clerics etc.

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