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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
About flying a kite
Can I say,
(a) Last Sunday, it was a windy day. Peter and his parents were at the beach. They saw many children flying kites.
(b) Peter wanted to fly a kite too. He persuaded his father to buy a kite for him. Then, his father bought a bird fly from the stall.
(c) After that, Peter joined other children on the beach. He had a great fun flying his kite. He was very happy.
(a) Last Sunday, it was a windy day. Peter and his parents were at the beach. They saw many children flying kites.
(b) Peter wanted to fly a kite too. He persuaded his father to buy a kite for him. Then, his father bought a bird fly from the stall.
(c) After that, Peter joined other children on the beach. He had a great fun flying his kite. He was very happy.
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(a) Last Sunday, it was a windy day. Peter and his parents were at the beach. They saw many children flying kites.
(b) Peter wanted to fly a kite too. He persuaded his father to buy a kite [can you see a way to avoid repeating the word "kite" here?] for him. Then, his father bought a bird fly [This doesn't sound right. "a kite in the shape of a flying bird" would make sense] from the sta
(b) Peter wanted to fly a kite too. He persuaded his father to buy a kite [can you see a way to avoid repeating the word "kite" here?] for him. Then, his father bought a bird fly [This doesn't sound right. "a kite in the shape of a flying bird" would make sense] from the sta
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