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Dear!
I’m here and talk about my family with you. I am 23 years old. I was born in Dong Nai on farm-house. My family is very small. I live with my mom, my father and my sister. We live in Dong Nai which very beautiful landscape. My mother’s Huong and my father’s Jonh. My mom and my father are farmers. My sister’s Uyen. She is studying high school.
My mom is very good at cooking. She cooks many dishes and I like it. My father is very busy with his rice fields. He is a hardworking and enthusiastic farmer. He always goes fishing at the weekend. My mom likes talking to everyone and shopping. My sister likes to watch cartoon program on YouTube. I like writing English and eat dishes from my mom to cook.
My family lives in harmony. I sometimes help my sister do homework. My parent always watches TV after dinner. They talk about the program on TV. In the morning, my mom cooks breakfast for the family. My sister eats and then go to school. She studies from 7h30 AM to 17h PM at the school. Next to, I begin to work at the company for 8 hours every day. I very love my family.
Family love is sacred that no something can compare with it. Money, a career can earn from the effort, but family love really is invaluable. The only parent bears difficulties to nourish offspring, help children grow up and have a better life.
Parents always intended for offspring all the best. They sacrifice themselves for the family. With parents, offspring is a precious treasure. No fences for family love if we love each other. They consider kid as all they have. They ready to give up all because of the children.
Family is a perfect gift for each person. It is a place to create laughter for each member family. Each member must know the role and responsibility of the family. Family happiness has an important role. Family is a familiar space for each person where they are born, grow up and help to develop character. A family happy is the cause for motivation to help people study and work. To one happy family, each member always effort to contribute to family.
In modern society, the heart is the hard prediction, the relationship is based benefit. Love is the main chain that helps to bring people together. It helps social more and more developing. Family love is a precious treasure. So, each member family needs consciousness to protect and build family love.
Each individual has a peaceful place. It can be a friend or a love. For me, the most peaceful place is family love. Family love helps people overcome difficulties in life. It is a place to help people have fun, with hope of overcoming easy difficulties. A family forever is a beautiful dream of people in the world. We work all because we want to direct happiness for parents and relatives. So, let’s go back home.
Best regards,
Lý Thanh Quân
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