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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
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About an incident - drowning boy
Ca nI say,
(a) A windy day, Peter and his friends went swimming in a river. It was lowtide and the water level was low.
(b) Suddenly, Peter felt his leg was stung by a water creature. He was very pain and shouted for help.
(c) Peter's father took him to hospital for treatment. The doctor gave Peter an injection. He advise Peter not to the river swimming because it was dangerous.
(a) A windy day, Peter and his friends went swimming in a river. It was lowtide and the water level was low.
(b) Suddenly, Peter felt his leg was stung by a water creature. He was very pain and shouted for help.
(c) Peter's father took him to hospital for treatment. The doctor gave Peter an injection. He advise Peter not to the river swimming because it was dangerous.
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(a) One windy day, Peter and his friends went swimming in a river. It was low tide and the water level was low. [repetition of "low" is rather clumsy]
(b) Suddenly, Peter felt his legwas stung by a water creature. [OK I suppose, but "water creature" sounds a bit vague.] He was in (great) pain and shouted for help.
(c) Peter's father took him to
(b) Suddenly, Peter felt his leg
(c) Peter's father took him to
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