Should I write like this way:<br/><br/>(a) Last Sunday was fine and sunnny. John and his friends were playing hide and seek. They played happily at the park where nearby their house.<br/><br/>(b) John was closing his eyes and counted to twenty. His friends quickly hid themselves. <br/><br/>(c) Finally, he found his friends hid behind the huge rock. John was happy because his friend would take turns. At the end, they went home together.<br/><br/>P/s: Can I say,<br/><br/>(i) John was closing his eyes with a cloth (do we call it "eyefold"?)<br/><br/>(ii) John eyefolded his eyes and started counting from one to twenty.