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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
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About a naughty puppy
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Last Sunday evening, it was hot and windy. After Peter's mother washed the bedsheet, she hung up it. After that, his dog, Puppy, was watching her.
Suddenly, a strong wind blew the bedsheet down. So the Puppy played and tored it happily.
When Ali's mother saw what had happened, she was very angry. She caught the Puppy and tied it on / around the pole. It was very sad.
Last Sunday evening, it was hot and windy. After Peter's mother washed the bedsheet, she hung up it. After that, his dog, Puppy, was watching her.
Suddenly, a strong wind blew the bedsheet down. So the Puppy played and tored it happily.
When Ali's mother saw what had happened, she was very angry. She caught the Puppy and tied it on / around the pole. It was very sad.
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Nice paragraph. Maybe a few changes might be helpful: Last Sunday evening, it was hot and windy. After Peter's mother had washed the bedsheet, she hung it up as Puppy, their dog, watched.
- Nice paragraph.
- Maybe a few changes might be helpful: Last Sunday evening, it was hot and windy.
- After Peter's mother had washed the bedsheet, she hung it up as Puppy, their dog, watched.
- When a strong wind suddenly blew the sheet down, Puppy ran over and started chewing it up.
- When Ali's mother saw what was happening, she became very angry.
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Nice paragraph. Maybe a few changes might be helpful: Last Sunday evening, it was hot and windy. After Peter's mother had washed the bedsheet, she hung it up as Puppy, their dog, watched. When a strong wind suddenly blew the sheet down, Puppy ran over and started chewing it up. When Ali's mother saw what was happening, she became very angry. She put a harness on Puppy and then attached the lo
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