Can I say,<br/><br/>(a) During the school holidays,<u> our school organised a camp. The camp was for Year Six. We went to Templer Park. We camped near the river.</u><br/><br/><u>(b) Aftter we arrived (there),</u> we were very happy. We together set up the tents. Then we went for a natural walk.<br/><br/>(c) At night, we had a campfire. We together sa<u>ng songs and played games happily</u>. <u>We had a lot of the fun. </u>