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Ben9108 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Abnormality of motor
0 I would be grateful if someone could help to give comment for the following sentence. 02 br
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00 The abnormality of fan motor for computer no.1, which motor tripped as the operating temperature at 28C, has been vertified by technician. 02 h3
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02 br 02 br 00 So the following are possible as a service report statement: 02 br 02 br 00 The problem on computer # 1 was verified by the techician to be a defective fan motor which caused the heat to build up and tripped the breaker. 02 br 00 The shut down of computer # 1 was caused by an abnormality in the cooling fan. Heat build-up tripped the thermo protective breaker.
- 02 br 02 br 00 So the following are possible as a service report statement: 02 br 02 br 00 The problem on computer # 1 was verified by the techician to be a defective fan motor which caused the heat to build up and tripped the breaker.
- 02 br 00 The shut down of computer # 1 was caused by an abnormality in the cooling fan.
- Heat build-up tripped the thermo protective breaker.
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0 This is how I would tecnically analyize this sentence. 02 br
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00 Why - Because computer # 1 expereinced problem 02 br
00 Cause - Computer cooling fan malfunctioned which had caused the thermo breaker to trip when the thermocouple detected temperature reaching 28 deg c. 02 br
00 Fact - Technician has verified the cause. 02 br
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00 Why - Because computer # 1 expereinced problem 02 br
00 Cause - Computer cooling fan malfunctioned which had caused the thermo breaker to trip when the thermocouple detected temperature reaching 28 deg c. 02 br
00 Fact - Technician has verified the cause. 02 br
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0 Thanks for your details of analyize. 02 br
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0 01 b 00 <<<>>>The abnormality of fan motor for computer no.1, which motor tripped as the operating temperature at 28C, has been vertified by technician. 02 br
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02 b 00 Yes, the sentence sounded bumpy and stiff, aside from grammatical mistakes. Technical report needs to be clear and accurate. That's the reason I gave you the breakdown and the
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02 b 00 Yes, the sentence sounded bumpy and stiff, aside from grammatical mistakes. Technical report needs to be clear and accurate. That's the reason I gave you the breakdown and the
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