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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
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Ability of invisibility

Please check out the following sentences.

(1) Human beings have long been aspiring to have the ability of invisibility.
(2) A lot of movies, literature or video games have described the ability of invisibility and apply it.
  

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I have underlined problems and struck out unnecessary verbiage: (1) Human beings have long been aspiring to have the ability of invisibility. (2) A lot of movies, literature or video games have described the ability of invisibility a nd app ly it.

  • I have underlined problems and struck out unnecessary verbiage: (1) Human beings have long been aspiring to have the ability of invisibility.
  • (2) A lot of movies, literature or video games have described the ability of invisibility a nd app ly it.
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I have underlined problems and struck out unnecessary verbiage:

(1) Human beings have long been aspiring to have the ability of invisibility.
(2) A lot of movies, literature or video games have described the ability of invisibility and apply it.
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(1) Humans have long aspired to invisibility.
(2) A lot of movies, literature and video games have described invisibility and applyed it.

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(1) People have long aspired to invisibility. -- Use 'human' when you are comparing/contrasting with animals.
(2) A lot of movies, literature and video games have described invisibility and applied it.
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A lot of movies, literature and video games have described invisibility and applied it.

Why here it can't use "or"?
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Because it is not a negative statement.

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