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Springmeans Posted 14 years ago
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A>B>C
Would this make sense to you? If not, can you kindly correct me using proper conjunctions?
One that you need in life is not a watch but a compass, but rather a mirror that you can see yourself through.
(What I wanted to say is we don't need a watch but a compass. But mirror is more important to have than a compass.)
One that you need in life is not a watch but a compass, but rather a mirror that you can see yourself through.
(What I wanted to say is we don't need a watch but a compass. But mirror is more important to have than a compass.)
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One thing that you need in life is not a watch but a compass, and rather a mirror that you can see yourself in is even more important. through . This is still quite stilted.
- One thing that you need in life is not a watch but a compass, and rather a mirror that you can see yourself in is even more important.
- through .
- This is still quite stilted.
- How about this version?
- The most important things to have in life are: first, a mirror, next, a compass, and finally, a watch.
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One thing that you need in life is not a watch but a compass, and rather a mirror that you can see yourself in is even more important. through.
This is still quite stilted. How about this version?
The most important things to have in life are: first, a mirror, next, a compass, and finally, a watch.
This is still quite stilted. How about this version?
The most important things to have in life are: first, a mirror, next, a compass, and finally, a watch.
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