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Zhossain Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
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"Life seems like and eternal intoxication;bliss if I ever find it, in a fleeting state but sadness remains forever.'
"Life seems like and eternal intoxication;bliss comes and goes like an fleeting wind but sadnesses are to stay forever.'
Hi,
can anyone check the above two sentences for me and say which one is better?
thanks
"Life seems like and eternal intoxication;bliss comes and goes like an fleeting wind but sadnesses are to stay forever.'
Hi,
can anyone check the above two sentences for me and say which one is better?
thanks
Top answer
Leave a space after the semi-colon (;). You seem to be confusing the words a , an , and and . sadness is almost always uncountable.
- Leave a space after the semi-colon (;).
- You seem to be confusing the words a , an , and and .
- sadness is almost always uncountable.
- I would not use the plural.
- Life seems like an eternal intoxication ; bliss comes and goes like a fleeting wind , but sadness stays forever.
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Leave a space after the semi-colon (;).
You seem to be confusing the words a, an, and and.
sadness is almost always uncountable. I would not use the plural.
Life seems like an eternal intoxication; bliss comes and goes like a fleeting wind, but sadness stays forever.
CJ
You seem to be confusing the words a, an, and and.
sadness is almost always uncountable. I would not use the plural.
Life seems like an eternal intoxication; bliss comes and goes like a fleeting wind, but sadness stays forever.
CJ
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Hi,
"Life seems like an eternal intoxication;bliss if I ever find it, in a fleeting state but sadness remains forever.'
"Life seems like an eternal intoxication;bliss comes and goes like an fleeting wind but sadnesses are to stay forever.'
can anyone check the above two sentences for me and say which one is better? Only #2 is correct. The structure of par
"Life seems like an eternal intoxication;bliss if I ever find it, in a fleeting state but sadness remains forever.'
"Life seems like an eternal intoxication;bliss comes and goes like an fleeting wind but sadnesses are to stay forever.'
can anyone check the above two sentences for me and say which one is better? Only #2 is correct. The structure of par
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thx buddies 
sorry i used 'and' in places of 'an' and 'an' where it wud b 'a'.
those are typos , but before fleet
sorry i used 'and' in places of 'an' and 'an' where it wud b 'a'.
those are typos , but before fleet
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comes and goes like the fleeting wind is fine. No problem there.
(in the fleeting state is not possible.)
CJ
(in the fleeting state is not possible.)
CJ
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Hi,
Yes, the fleeting wind is correct grammar.
But so is a fleeting wind.
Clive
Yes, the fleeting wind is correct grammar.
But so is a fleeting wind.
Clive
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Hello, zhossain. Please use more meaningful thread titles. 'Abc' is no good. Use something like 'A fleeting wind', for instance.
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zhossainthx buddies
sorry i used 'and' in places of 'an' and 'an' where it wud b 'a'.
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