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'There is nothig more insane than destroying one's own creation.It makes you sad, it makes you feel low, not everyone has it what it takes to do it.Thats why one gets immense pleasure when he does it.'

could anyone please tell me what i written above and wanted to say is right or need to be corrected?

can I replace the word creation with child? In place of the word 'destroy' what other word can be used?

finally what about using 'ultimate' than immense?

and if you have to rephare the whole thing how would u do it?

thanks in advance

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

'There is nothig more insane than destroying one's own creation.It makes you sad, it makes you feel low, not everyone has it what it takes to do it.Thats why one gets immense pleasure when he does it.'

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There is nothing more insane than destroying one's own creation. It makes one sad, it makes one feel low, and not everyone has it what it takes to do it. That's why one gets immense pleasure when one does it.'

could anyone please tell me what i written above and wanted to say is right or need to be corrected?

Here are a few minor edits. If you use 'one', be consistent. Or you could use the less formal 'you'. But again, be consistent.

can I replace the word creation with child? I wouldn't. But if you do, say something like 'child of one's imagination', to make clear that you do not mean the word literally.

In place of the word 'destroy' what other word can be used? I like 'destroy'. It's such a strong word.

finally what about using 'ultimate' suggests 'final'

than immense? suggests 'very big'

and if you have to rephare the whole thing how would u do it? I like it the way you wrote it. It's an interesting thought.

Clive

Zhossain · Answer

hey clive,

Thank you very much. I face some difficulties using the daily life converssation. I just cant decide which word to put when. Im a newbie here. still needs sometime to get in touch with the forum.

Is there any section where I can ask /practice dailylife stuffs? I also need help understanding the basic gramatical stuffs

Thanks again

Hossain

Clive · Answer

Hi,

Just post questions and sentences here for us to help you with. OK?

Clive

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