A young girl, Risa...
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A young girl, Risa, innocently makes a wish on her 8th birthday to have friends so that she does not feel lonely anymore. Since then her mother Elly begins to suspect something amiss as her daughter is often heard laughing and playing on her own. With the help of Elly’s friend, Risa is forced away from that house. 9 Years later Risa returns to the same house with her sister Riri to take care of her grandmother. But soon, the unusual events and disturbances start to take place.
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anonymous A young girl, Bu definition, girls and boys are young and therefore, adding the word 'young' is unnecessary. anonymous the unusual events You have not mentioned any in particular so, you don't need 'the'.
- anonymous A young girl, Bu definition, girls and boys are young and therefore, adding the word 'young' is unnecessary.
- anonymous the unusual events You have not mentioned any in particular so, you don't need 'the'.
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anonymousAyounggirl,
Bu definition, girls and boys are young and therefore, adding the word 'young' is unnecessary.
anonymoustheunusual events
You have not mentioned any in particular so, you don't need 'the'.
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