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Redgiant Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A wrestler introduction
This is a short introduction with some newly learned words. Would you help proofread and point out the mistakes, thanks for your help
A decent wrestler graduated from Global Star Wrestling School under the guidance of his father, Mr Peter, former champion. The strict training there gives him a solid all round moveset and brawling skills. Everytimes he stepped onto the ring, the fans know that they will have a feast for the eyes with his flashy and dramatic performance. This wins a lot of praise and respect from fans. But he cannot get along with his peers well because his stiff wrestling style tends to injure his peers. There has been a great deal of publicity surround his conflict with other colleagues. It will be a fatal flaw that can keep him from going far if unsolved. Therefore it is imperative to improve his stiffness and backstage attitude before becoming an exciting prospect and carrying on the legacy.
A decent wrestler graduated from Global Star Wrestling School under the guidance of his father, Mr Peter, former champion. The strict training there gives him a solid all round moveset and brawling skills. Everytimes he stepped onto the ring, the fans know that they will have a feast for the eyes with his flashy and dramatic performance. This wins a lot of praise and respect from fans. But he cannot get along with his peers well because his stiff wrestling style tends to injure his peers. There has been a great deal of publicity surround his conflict with other colleagues. It will be a fatal flaw that can keep him from going far if unsolved. Therefore it is imperative to improve his stiffness and backstage attitude before becoming an exciting prospect and carrying on the legacy.
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I have underscored some problem areas: A decent wrestler graduated from Global Star Wrestling School under the guidance of his father, Mr Peter [ Peter is usually a first name and sounds odd with 'Mr' ], former champion. The strict training there gives him a solid all round moveset and brawling skills. Everytimes he stepped onto the ring, the fans know that they will have a feast for the eyes with his flashy and dramatic performance.
- I have underscored some problem areas: A decent wrestler graduated from Global Star Wrestling School under the guidance of his father, Mr Peter [ Peter is usually a first name and sounds odd with 'Mr' ], former champion.
- The strict training there gives him a solid all round moveset and brawling skills.
- Everytimes he stepped onto the ring, the fans know that they will have a feast for the eyes with his flashy and dramatic performance.
- This wins a lot of praise and respect from fans .
- But he cannot get along with his peers well because his stiff wrestling style tends to injure his peers .
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I have underscored some problem areas:
A decent wrestler graduated from Global Star Wrestling School under the guidance of his father, Mr Peter [Peter is usually a first name and sounds odd with 'Mr'], former champion. The strict training there gives him a solid all round moveset and brawling skills. Everytimes
I have underscored some problem areas:
A decent wrestler graduated from Global Star Wrestling School under the guidance of his father, Mr Peter [Peter is usually a first name and sounds odd with 'Mr'], former champion. The strict training there gives him a solid all round moveset and brawling skills. Everytimes
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