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Mr. Tom Posted 6 years ago
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A wave of fury swept across him.

Hi

Would you say these lines are natural English? Any suggestions are welcome.

“I think you should do what the great wizard Romnal is asking you to do, my Majesty. That's the only way to escape his fury,” the old man said with his head firmly bowed. He knew his suggestion could put him in great trouble, even cost him his life.

The king could not believe his ears. A wave of fury swept across him. He was almost trembling with rage. But for some unknown reason, he remained quiet until the grappling emotions eased his mind and body.

“I always believed that you were a wise man—wise enough to give me the right advice when I needed some.” He said bitterly to his old advisor.

Thanks,

Tom

  

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Mr. Tom “I think you should do what the great wizard Romnal is asking you to do, my Majesty. It's "Your Majesty", with the caps.

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  • Tom “I think you should do what the great wizard Romnal is asking you to do, my Majesty.
  • It's "Your Majesty", with the caps.
  • He is the one with the majesty, not you.
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Mr. Tom“I think you should do what the great wizard Romnal is asking you to do, my Majesty.

It's "Your Majesty", with the caps. He is the one with the majesty, not you.

Mr. TomThat's the only way to escape his fury,” the old man said with his head firmly bowed.

It's too late to tell us where his head is. Put that i

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