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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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A visit to the zoo
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Last Sunday morning, it was really breezy. John and Peter went to the park nearby for exercice. About 20 minutes later, they saw a monkey playing around the trees. It lookes funny. They teased the monkey and chased after it. Soon, the monkey climbed a rambutan tree.
There were plenty of ripe rambutans on the tree. It plucked the rambutans and ate them on the tree. It made them mouth-watering. They asked the monkey for fruit. The clever monkey seemed like to know what they want.
It started plucking the rambutans (from the tree) and threw them to the ground. They were excited to see a clutch of rambutans on the ground. Peter shared them with his friends themselves. It was really a lucky day for them.
Last Sunday morning, it was really breezy. John and Peter went to the park nearby for exercice. About 20 minutes later, they saw a monkey playing around the trees. It lookes funny. They teased the monkey and chased after it. Soon, the monkey climbed a rambutan tree.
There were plenty of ripe rambutans on the tree. It plucked the rambutans and ate them on the tree. It made them mouth-watering. They asked the monkey for fruit. The clever monkey seemed like to know what they want.
It started plucking the rambutans (from the tree) and threw them to the ground. They were excited to see a clutch of rambutans on the ground. Peter shared them with his friends themselves. It was really a lucky day for them.
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John and Peter went to a nearby park to exercise. *** A monkey playing in the trees. *** It looked funny.
- John and Peter went to a nearby park to exercise.
- *** A monkey playing in the trees.
- *** It looked funny.
- *** The monkey plucked the rambutans and ate them.
- *** It made the boys' mouths water.
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John and Peter went to a nearby park to exercise. *** A monkey playing in the trees. *** It looked funny. *** The monkey plucked the rambutans and ate them. *** It made the boys' mouths water. *** monkey seemed to know what they wanted. *** Peter and John shared them.
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