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Vincent Teo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A visit
Please help me to check it, thanks.
(a) It was a Sunday morning. / One Sunday morning, Susan's aunt and uncle wanted to pay a vist to her. She woke up early and got ready everything. She arrived at the railway station about / around / at 10.00 a.m. She waited for them patiently at the station.
(b) Susan saw them when the train arrived. She waved (her hands) and smiled at them. / She saw them carrying some luggage walking to / towards her. Her aunt happily hugged her and kissed her forehead. Susan quickly helped them carrying / take the heavy luggage home.
(c) When they reached home, her parents were out (for shopping). She chatted (with them) happily in the living room. Susan served them well. Her aunt and uncle brought a lot of presents for her. She felt happy and thanked them gratefully. They stayed (at her house) for 2 days. It was a happy day for them.
(a) It was a Sunday morning. / One Sunday morning, Susan's aunt and uncle wanted to pay a vist to her. She woke up early and got ready everything. She arrived at the railway station about / around / at 10.00 a.m. She waited for them patiently at the station.
(b) Susan saw them when the train arrived. She waved (her hands) and smiled at them. / She saw them carrying some luggage walking to / towards her. Her aunt happily hugged her and kissed her forehead. Susan quickly helped them carrying / take the heavy luggage home.
(c) When they reached home, her parents were out (for shopping). She chatted (with them) happily in the living room. Susan served them well. Her aunt and uncle brought a lot of presents for her. She felt happy and thanked them gratefully. They stayed (at her house) for 2 days. It was a happy day for them.
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Hi Vincent - I have made some suggestions. (a) It was a Sunday morning. One Sunday morning, Susan's aunt and uncle wanted to pay a vist to her.
- Hi Vincent - I have made some suggestions.
- (a) It was a Sunday morning.
- One Sunday morning, Susan's aunt and uncle wanted to pay a vist to her.
- She woke up early and got ready everything ready .
- m.
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Hi Vincent - I have made some suggestions.
(a) It was a Sunday morning.
One Sunday morning, Susan's aunt and uncle wanted to pay a vist to her. She woke up early and gotready everything ready. She arrived at the railway station about / around / at 10.00 a.m. She waited for them patiently at the station.
(a) It was a Sunday morning.
One Sunday morning, Susan's aunt and uncle wanted to pay a vist to her. She woke up early and got
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