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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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A tribal man

Hi, can someone please give your feedback on the below sentence.


A tribal man who escapes from the captivity of the men hunting his people, finds himself in the care and protection of a rich girl who ends up falling in love with him.

  

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No. Say eg A tribe member who escapes from the captivity of the men hunting his people no comma finds himself in the care and under the protection of a rich girl who ends up falling in love with him.

  • No.
  • Say eg A tribe member who escapes from the captivity of the men hunting his people no comma finds himself in the care and under the protection of a rich girl who ends up falling in love with him.
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No.

Say eg A tribe member who escapes from the captivity of the men hunting his people no comma finds himself in the care and under the protection of a rich girl who ends up falling in love with him.

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