Hi, can someone please give your feedback on the below sentence.
A tribal man who escapes from the captivity of the men hunting his people, finds himself in the care and protection of a rich girl who ends up falling in love with him.
No. Say eg A tribe member who escapes from the captivity of the men hunting his people no comma finds himself in the care and under the protection of a rich girl who ends up falling in love with him.
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No.
Say eg A tribe member who escapes from the captivity of the men hunting his people no comma finds himself in the care and under the protection of a rich girl who ends up falling in love with him.