A translation version of a student

Teachers, would you please put the following exercise correct?



XYZ Co., Ltd. is a professional manufacturer in making die-cast auto models in .
Established in 1998, the company is located in ABC district, Shenzhen, and enjoys convenient transportation and a beautiful environment. It has a 5000 square meters workshop building area and nearly 500 staff members, including more than 50 superior administrators,technologically-talented professional designers, engineers and skilled technicians.
To make high quality products, the company is very strict with every step of production. It not only puts under control the purchasing of raw materials, product-developing, the producing process, but also the sales and after service, etc.
Pursuing a growth strategy based on high standard programming and construction, the company has been running in accordance with the ISO14000 system since it was established. The company keeps up with the world by introducing continuously into talent, technology and all sorts of equipment, and now it has become a considerably modern one in the car-model field.
In the "law of the jungle" business world, the company sticks to the notion that only by mastering high technology can a company produce high quality products and then have a favorable position and develop itself further, so it maintains that invigorating the factory through science and technology strategy is the primary task of management.

Thank you.