Could you give me a little feedback on how this poem sounds? If it sounds naturally, if it is grammatically correct? Maybe if you have any kind of suggestions that could improve it? That would be great, thank you very much. “He: a nice, young child Smart, poor, with a big heart She: his mother has no words To express her sorrow They have nothing but poverty; She works wherever she is offered Her heart does not desire riches, She only wants her child to smile tomorrow She kisses him, at night She hugs him tightly in his bed He pleads her for a penny or two, If she has some The little one comes one night With all he has gathered up till then And he tells his mother: “Take the money with you And bring me some new shoes tomorrow.” Sighing after having heard that She takes his hands into her hands With her eyes pointing to the sky So that he won’t see her cry: “Why?” she whispers fearfully Feeling her soul pierced with pain “I know you have no money, mommy, You can barely make ends meet And the shoes I have now, you know well Are old and split apart by rain This is why, I reckon, Saint Nicholas Has never come to our house…”
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Astormwithskin This is why, I reckon, Saint Nicholas Has never come to our house… Who was Saint Nicholas?
— Monox D. I-Fly
Astormwithskin This is why, I reckon, Saint Nicholas Has never come to our house… Who was Saint Nicholas?
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