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The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How this increase in the availability of information influence life does today's world?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In the last 20 years we have been dealing with a new event in the history of the human, "The renascence of the Internet" some people may call it. Nowadays we have Internet, in the car, in the plan, also in a small undeveloped city in South-America almost anywhere; Internet is definitely an integral part in our life. The Internet has a good influence in our life, but also has drawbacks.
Once of the biggest drawback witch cause by the Internet is that we are not thinking anymore. A good example for it has occurred me while I was reading a book, While the reading I read a phrase "It's always darkest before the sun-raise" I knew this phrase form a very known song, but I couldn't figure it out which song is it, I told to myself: "don't google it like always", "Think”, And I have found that I didn't do this verb for a long time, always that I have a question I google it or translate it, I am not devoting time for dip thinking and it's is harm my Intelligent, and so everybody else.
The second drawback is, the Internet contains unlimited Information, and sometime it's too much. For example, there is Information like: "How to make a bomb”, or "how to suicide", that Information should band from any website, they causes damage and are not useful, the Internet need to contain only relevant Information, like: "How to make a taco" Information that not causing damage. Also the Internet needs to be managed, for example to limit the time on Facebook to 2 hours per day, or on multiplayers games. In China for example award about the teenage problem with the spending time on multiplayer games, so player who spends more than 3 hours per-day, would loses points and credit in the game, and this cause them to limit they play hours.
I definitely think that the unlimited Information from the Internet helps, and also helps me, but it cause to rapid changes and in the long term it could harms us.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In the last 20 years we have been dealing with a new event in the history of the human, "The renascence of the Internet" some people may call it. Nowadays we have Internet, in the car, in the plan, also in a small undeveloped city in South-America almost anywhere; Internet is definitely an integral part in our life. The Internet has a good influence in our life, but also has drawbacks.
Once of the biggest drawback witch cause by the Internet is that we are not thinking anymore. A good example for it has occurred me while I was reading a book, While the reading I read a phrase "It's always darkest before the sun-raise" I knew this phrase form a very known song, but I couldn't figure it out which song is it, I told to myself: "don't google it like always", "Think”, And I have found that I didn't do this verb for a long time, always that I have a question I google it or translate it, I am not devoting time for dip thinking and it's is harm my Intelligent, and so everybody else.
The second drawback is, the Internet contains unlimited Information, and sometime it's too much. For example, there is Information like: "How to make a bomb”, or "how to suicide", that Information should band from any website, they causes damage and are not useful, the Internet need to contain only relevant Information, like: "How to make a taco" Information that not causing damage. Also the Internet needs to be managed, for example to limit the time on Facebook to 2 hours per day, or on multiplayers games. In China for example award about the teenage problem with the spending time on multiplayer games, so player who spends more than 3 hours per-day, would loses points and credit in the game, and this cause them to limit they play hours.
I definitely think that the unlimited Information from the Internet helps, and also helps me, but it cause to rapid changes and in the long term it could harms us.
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Here are suggestions for your first paragraphs. Please check the last paragraphs carefully, because they have problems, too. The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before.
- Here are suggestions for your first paragraphs.
- Please check the last paragraphs carefully, because they have problems, too.
- The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before.
- How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in does today's world?
- Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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Here are suggestions for your first paragraphs. Please check the last paragraphs carefully, because they have problems, too.
The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life indoes today's world?
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The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in
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