A Toefl essay.

I am studing for the toefl, and there is a part of a topic essay, They ask a stupid question on a easy topic and I need to prepire this question, it is check mostly the gremmar, and want to see if I can write in English.
I am sharing the essay, tell me what do you think.

Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.

Childhood is a wonderful era in any person’s life time, it is also very important to the development of a person and that what cause to this era to be so delicate that had built our personality, but we usually tend to forget the bad parts of it.

I remember when I was a kid Saturday off was like a dream for me, every Saturday morning I went to my parent’s room and jumped on them while they were sleeping, then we ate and entered to the car and traveling over the country. Without any worries of work or paying bills. Since I have grown up I can't let myself enjoy like I was a kid, Adulthood is like a non-stopping race in a very fast pace. Questions like: "What I am going to do with my life" Or "Where I want to live" or "If she the right for me" are always disturbed me, any time everywhere.

But not everything is good for kids, Kid is still kid and he doesn't has the responsibility for doing nothing, they can't drive, they can't sleep late, they can't travel alone can't watch everything on TV, They can't even stay home alone.
They have to listen to its parents even if they wanted are different form the parents, It is sound hard with all thus restricted. I remember when I was a kid, my parents promised me went to a big show on my birthday, but week before my birthday I fought with my teacher and because of that my parents didn’t let me go to the show, I felt so weak.

There are lots of advantage and disadvantage of being kid but for most of us it was always been a happiest time.

Thanks.