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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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a title of a notic
For a title of a notice placed in a building>
could you please tell me if the following is intelligible?
< Technical blackout due to Legal Checkup of Electrical Installation>
could you please tell me if the following is intelligible?
< Technical blackout due to Legal Checkup of Electrical Installation>
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A blackout means people will be left in the dark, ie at night. Do you mean this? Your title seems to me to be awkward and wordy.
- A blackout means people will be left in the dark, ie at night.
- Do you mean this?
- Your title seems to me to be awkward and wordy.
- I suggest eg Power outage due to electrical inspection.
- Clive
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A blackout means people will be left in the dark, ie at night. Do you mean this?
Your title seems to me to be awkward and wordy.
I suggest
eg Power outage due to electrical inspection.
Clive
Your title seems to me to be awkward and wordy.
I suggest
eg Power outage due to electrical inspection.
Clive
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