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Mr. Tom Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

A teacher must try to improve his students' level...

Hi

Are these two sentences natural? Any suggestions are welcome.

A teacher must try to improve his students' interest level in the work they do.
A teacher must try to improve the level of his students' interest in the work they do.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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It's a good idea to use as few words as necessary to communicate your point. Also, technically, you would say to increase a level rather than to improve a level. Here is an example of what you could do: A teacher must try to increase his students' interest in the work they do.

  • It's a good idea to use as few words as necessary to communicate your point.
  • Also, technically, you would say to increase a level rather than to improve a level.
  • Here is an example of what you could do: A teacher must try to increase his students' interest in the work they do.
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It's a good idea to use as few words as necessary to communicate your point. Emotion: wink Also, technically, you would sayto increase a level

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