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Englishuser Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hi,

Any suggestions as to how this paragraph could be improved? Perhaps there are some errors in there...
The origins of Esperanto can be traced to the situation in the nineteenth century, by which time Latin had lost its position as the universal language of scholarship and wider communication in Europe and the western world. With the growth of national languages throughout Europe, people had begun to be more aware that there was a language problem: people couldn’t understand one another unless they learnt one another’s languages. Foreign languages are hard to learn, and even the best linguists can learn only a handful of the thousands of languages in the world. (Even today, if we consider only those languages with a large enough literate population to have a daily newspaper is published in them, we are faced with somewhere between 50 and 100 such major languages. Probably none of us have mastered more than five or six of them; and most people know fewer.)
The paragraph is written by Professor John C. Wells, University College London.
  

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Personally I would drop the brackets. Also 'newspaper is published' should be 'newspaper published'. I would also lose the semi-colon in the final sentence.

  • Personally I would drop the brackets.
  • Also 'newspaper is published' should be 'newspaper published'.
  • I would also lose the semi-colon in the final sentence.
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Personally I would drop the brackets. Also 'newspaper is published' should be 'newspaper published'. I would also lose the semi-colon in the final sentence.
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Hi Nona,

Thanks for the reply. It seems like not even Professor John C. Wells knows English well enough to be able to write without making any mistakes whatsoever... We'll see when I'll find a sample text which is free from mistakes. Perhaps I have to quote ESL-textbooks (which should be properly copy-edited).
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Well, it may not be the way that he originally wrote it. It has been through the hands of several other people before publication, who may well have made changes or errors. I think it's almost impossible to find a book without a few typos or errors.
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Hi Nona,

You said:
I think it's almost impossible to find a book without a few typos or errors.
What about schoolbooks and ESL-textbooks? Wouldn't you suppose such materials are relatively free from errors? Also, it would be very interesting to learn about how you improved your own writing. Other people could very well benefit from knowing your tricks, should you ch

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