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Odessa Dawn Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

A sympathy letter ...

Thank you for your polite response to my request. And I feel a lot of sympathy for the terrible thing happening to you. You, of course, will get the better of it. Please feel free to contact me for any support. May I wish you all the best on managing those conflicting demands.

Could you please tell me where I should make some improvements?
  

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What is the terrible thing?

  • What is the terrible thing?
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What is the terrible thing?
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It's very general, and I'm not sure how to correct it.
I still don't understand what "terrible thing" means ("troublesome" is just an adjective). Also, did they agree to your request?
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Hi teechr,

I will rewrite it. My request was rejected.
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Hi …—and many thanks for your polite response.

Apology accepted. I feel a lot of sympathy for what is happening to you. You, of course, will get the better of it. May I wish you all the best on managing those conflicting demands. Please feel free to contact me for any support.

The recipient is always very helpful. (The one?) I hope in the majority. But this time I have been unluc
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Sorry, I don't understand your post.
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May l know which post you do not understand?
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I don't understand any of your posts about this.
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Thank you for your time, Clive.Emotion: bowNever mind! I will paraphrase it, and then post a new thread.

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