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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
A stressed-out
Can someone please check this sentence? Let me know if there's a grammar mistake, thanks.
Short summary
A stressed-out graphic designer, Yoon, comes down with a skin rash and falls in love with the attractive female doctor who's treating him.
Long summary
Yoon, a sleep-deprived freelance graphic designer, works 24/7, and develops a mysterious skin rash across his body. When he goes to the public clinic to treat the rashes, he develops a crush on his doctor, Imm, and tries his best to follow her medical advice. Will Doctor Imm be able to diagnose Yoon’s syndrome before it gets worse?
Short summary
A stressed-out graphic designer, Yoon, comes down with a skin rash and falls in love with the attractive female doctor who's treating him.
Long summary
Yoon, a sleep-deprived freelance graphic designer, works 24/7, and develops a mysterious skin rash across his body. When he goes to the public clinic to treat the rashes, he develops a crush on his doctor, Imm, and tries his best to follow her medical advice. Will Doctor Imm be able to diagnose Yoon’s syndrome before it gets worse?
Top answer
It's all good until here: "When he goes to the public clinic to have his rash treated, he develops a crush on his doctor, Imm, and tries his best to follow her medical advice. " The "rash" is the medical problem. It has already been diagnosed.
- It's all good until here: "When he goes to the public clinic to have his rash treated, he develops a crush on his doctor, Imm, and tries his best to follow her medical advice.
- " The "rash" is the medical problem.
- It has already been diagnosed.
- However, if it's important to diagnose also the source of the rash, then perhaps you could alter your sentence to say this.
- A rash is definitely not a syndrome, but may be a symptom of a syndrome.
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It's all good until here:
"When he goes to the public clinic to have his rash treated, he develops a crush on his doctor, Imm, and tries his best to follow her medical advice. Will Doctor Imm be able to treat Yoon’s rash before it gets worse?"
The "rash" is the medical problem. It has already been diagnosed. However, if it's important to diagnose also the s
"When he goes to the public clinic to have his rash treated, he develops a crush on his doctor, Imm, and tries his best to follow her medical advice. Will Doctor Imm be able to treat Yoon’s rash before it gets worse?"
The "rash" is the medical problem. It has already been diagnosed. However, if it's important to diagnose also the s
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I will take note on that, Michael Chambers. Thanks a lot for your kind help.
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