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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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A strem of new force

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In addition, the youth also participated in trans-school volunteer club, partook in the task of reconstruction in the remote district severely-stricken by Typhoon Morakot. As growing older, he is gradually able to realize his mother’s thought to be a volunteer to help other people in Buddhist Compassion Relief Tzu Chi Foundation. Seeing there are so many vegetables caused grievous bodily harm by riding scooter without wearing a helmet, he perceives that life is fragile. Therefore, he not only reminds himself but also appeals to the public never riding a scooter without wearing a helmet. He speaks in a humble way, “There are so many people to express my gratitude. I hope I can turn my love into little power and generate a stream of new force rushing to the world.”
  

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In addition, the youth also participated in the inter-school volunteer club and partook in the task of reconstruction in the remote district severely stricken by Typhoon Morakot. As he grew older, he was gradually able to realize his mother’s hope that he would be a volunteer to help other people in the Buddhist Compassion Relief Tzu Chi Foundation. Seeing there are so many disabled people caused grievous bodily harm by riding a scooter without a helmet, he perceived that life is fragile.

  • In addition, the youth also participated in the inter-school volunteer club and partook in the task of reconstruction in the remote district severely stricken by Typhoon Morakot.
  • As he grew older, he was gradually able to realize his mother’s hope that he would be a volunteer to help other people in the Buddhist Compassion Relief Tzu Chi Foundation.
  • Seeing there are so many disabled people caused grievous bodily harm by riding a scooter without a helmet, he perceived that life is fragile.
  • Therefore, he not only reminds himself but also appeals to the public never to ride a scooter without one .
  • He says humbly , “There are so many people to express my gratitude to.
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In addition, the youth also participated in the inter-school volunteer club and partook in the task of reconstruction in the remote district severely stricken by Typhoon Morakot. As he grew older, he was gradually able to realize his mother’s hope that he would be a volunteer to help other people in the Buddhist Compassion Relief Tzu Chi Foundation.
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The original meaning of the underlined part of the sentence is her mother is already a volunteer in the Tzu Chi Foundation, not the youth. Her mother's great act for the public affects him to do good deeds.

As he grew older, he was gradually able to realize his mother’s hope that he would be a volunteer to help other people in the Buddhist Compassion Relief Tzu Chi Foundat
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As he grew older, he was gradually able to realize his mother’s hope that he would also be a volunteer to help other people in the Buddhist Compassion Relief Tzu Chi Foundation.

As he grew older, he was gradually able to follow his mother as a volunteer to help other people in the Buddhist Compassion Relief Tzu Chi Foundation

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