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Mr. Tom Posted 17 years ago
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A strange spiritual power descend on her...
Hi
Do you find the bold part OK? The story is about a naive girl and her blind belief in a "holy" man.
Tom
Do you find the bold part OK? The story is about a naive girl and her blind belief in a "holy" man.
As the holy man entered the room, she could feel a strange spiritual power descend on her.Thanks,
Tom
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I think I would probably more naturally write "descending", but I think what you have is OK.
- I think I would probably more naturally write "descending", but I think what you have is OK.
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I think I would probably more naturally write "descending", but I think what you have is OK.
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