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Sundarnaz Posted 9 years ago
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A story in my own English part1
Once a stag came to a stream to drink water. While drinking water he saw his own reflection in the clear water of the stream. He was delighted at the sight of his beautiful horns which were large and branched. He was full of praise for them.
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sundarnaz Once a stag came to a stream to drink water . You don't really need the last word. sundarnaz While drinking water You don't really need the last word.
- sundarnaz Once a stag came to a stream to drink water .
- You don't really need the last word.
- sundarnaz While drinking water You don't really need the last word.
- sundarnaz horns Wrong word.
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sundarnazOnce a stag came to a stream to drinkwater.
You don't really need the last word.
sundarnazWhile drinkingwater
You don't really need the last word.
sundarnazhorns
Wrong word. Deer have antlers
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He was delighted at the sight of his beautiful horns, which were large and branched.
Otherwise, OK.
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