Suddenly, he caught sight of his legs. He thought they were thin and ugly. He became sad and considered himself unlucky because of his legs.
In the meantime he saw some hounds coming towards him like the wind. He realised the danger and ran at full speed to save his life.
There is nothing wrong with your grammar. The narratives are a little odd.
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There is nothing wrong with your grammar. The narratives are a little odd.