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WesternAmerican Posted 19 years ago
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A speech for my neigbhour. Help me out.

Dear Hosts and Guests,

This is the first time that we assemble together after 10 long years of disconnection between our twin cities of Rishon Le-Zion and Hirfin.
I truly hope that our renewed relationship will last for many more years to come, and that our mutuality will drag new sport-related and music-wise cooperation.


This is what I've written down so far; This is only the beginning of the speech.
Please point out any errors and enlighten me with new ideas.
  

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Dear Hosts and Guests,

This is the first time that we assemble are together again after 10 long years of disconnection between our twin cities of Rishon Le-Zion and Hirfin.
I truly hope that our renewed relationship will last for many more years to come, and that our mutuality will drag new sport-related a

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