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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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A special zoo
Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph for me? Thanks a lot.
Last night, I saw a movie about a giant gorilla. A young woman had a gorilla as a friend. One day, she took the gorilla, Andy, toAmerica. She sent Andy to a special zoo, but he didn’t like it. Then, some hunters tried to kill him. Later, Andy escaped from the zoo and stayed on the run for a long time. In the end, the woman heard the news and found Andy, then stopped the hunters. Andy was so lucky to have a friend who could save him like that.
Last night, I saw a movie about a giant gorilla. A young woman had a gorilla as a friend. One day, she took the gorilla, Andy, toAmerica. She sent Andy to a special zoo, but he didn’t like it. Then, some hunters tried to kill him. Later, Andy escaped from the zoo and stayed on the run for a long time. In the end, the woman heard the news and found Andy, then stopped the hunters. Andy was so lucky to have a friend who could save him like that.
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