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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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A special place

I remember as a young child every summer going to Jeddah and visiting my aunt. Through these visits, we became very close. She always treated me as if I was her own daughter. Staying in her house always brought me a feeling of comfort. I was allowed to run free and open the refrigerator, the cabinets, and change the channel on the TV just as I please. Her home even looked cosy and comfortable. The aroma of plants and flowers filled every room in the house. Sights of pictures hanging over the fireplace convinced everyone who walked through the house that this home was filled with love. Relaxation and calmness occur within the heart as the peaceful home filled with nothing but silence. Religious pictures were hung throughout the house. My aunt’s house was a special place where I spent many summers, which helped me become the person I am.
Three bedrooms existed in this home. Every bedroom had its own special uniqueness to them. The room I probably spent the most of my time in was the playroom. From wall to wall , it was filled with stuffed animals. The room was designed in pink and blue to make certain that both boys and girls felt welcome. In the corner was a large bunk bed that made the perfect jungle gym. All the little kids would play in this room whenever we came over. We played games, watched movies and always took naps after a large home cooked lunch.
As soon as the door to the second bedroom opened, it was obvious that it was a teenager’s room. From floor to ceiling, the walls were covered with all the teen idols of the day. Posters of the Go-Go’s and Culture Club were some of my first introductions to the pop music of the eighties. Make-up was all over the dresser. In conclusion, I really long for those days when I was visiting my aunt in Jeddah, and being free in her house.

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Anonymous Could you please check? I remember as a young child going to Jeddah every summer and visiting my aunt. During these visits, we became very close.

  • Anonymous Could you please check?
  • I remember as a young child going to Jeddah every summer and visiting my aunt.
  • During these visits, we became very close.
  • She always treated me as if I were her own daughter.
  • Staying in her house always brought me a feeling of comfort.
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AnonymousCould you please check?
I remember as a young child going to Jeddah every summer and visiting my aunt. During these visits, we became very close. She always treated me as if I were her own daughter. Staying in her house always brought me a feeling of comfort. I was allowed to run free and open the refrigerator, the cabinets, and c
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Do I have to say "I was allowed to run free and open the refrigerator, the cabinets, and change the..."?
I think I have to say "A refrigerator, cabinets, and change the channel of TV " because they are not mentioned before.
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"I was allowed to run free and open a refrigerator, cabinets, and change the..." That means that you had many refrigerators to choose from. How many refrigerators did the house have?

"I was allowed to run free and open the refrigerator, cabinets, and change the..." This means that the house had one refrigerator. It was in the kitchen and used to keep food cold.
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Is it correct to write this in conclusion.

"I really long for those days when I was visiting my aunt in Jeddah and being free to do whatever I want. It was really unforgettable memories when the little kids and I were playing games and watching movies together. I really loved spending my time with my aunt and the little kids. The room I spent the most of my time in was really one of my sp
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"I really long for those days when I was visiting my aunt in Jeddah and being free to do whatever I wanted. (I didn't correct the tense in your previous paragraphs.) My really unforgettable memories are times when the little kids and I were playing games and watching movies together. I really loved spending my time with my aunt and the little kids. The room I spent the
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Thank you very much..

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