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InFlamez Posted 14 years ago
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A small report

If you're free and bored, please give me a hand revising this smallm linguistically weak report:

A few days ago, Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, was on time for the singer of glorious Danish Revolution, John Ericsson. Warbling with his unique and powerful voice, the creative artist sang for the revolution and revolutionaries, stirring up the enthusiasm of the audience that joined him in singing. Inspired by the revolutionaries in blessed Denmark, John's audience spontaneously formed singing and dancing rings. Martin, as known as “the keeper”, sole star of famous “Everything goes on” web television series, joined John in this event and both presented joint segments making the audience interact with and applaud for greatly. During the ceremony, introductory segments were presented about the Danish Expatriates’ Coordination of the interior support (DEC), the mechanism, and the active teams thereof. The ceremony was marked by the presence of the families of the DEC’s heroes; Michael and Steve. Attendees raced to buy glasses of Michael and shirt of Steve, knowing that the price will go to support our people at home. The glasses were sold for 15000 USD and the shirt for 53800 USD. It was confirmed by DEC that the event’s proceeds will go to the relief of our people in the affected areas.

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Obviously no one is free or bored Emotion: tongue tied

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