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Perfect Stranger Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A simple sentence that doesn't sound too well.

Hello,

Could you help me make these sentences more native-like, please?


There are just some things that sometimes worry me about us and the passing time. I will tell you why, but I need to take my eyes off of the computer screen now and do some thinking in peace and quiet.


Thank you.

  

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eg There are just some things that sometimes worry me about us as time goes on . I'll tell you why, but I need to take my eyes off of the computer screen now and do some thinking in peace and quiet . Clive

  • eg There are just some things that sometimes worry me about us as time goes on .
  • I'll tell you why, but I need to take my eyes off of the computer screen now and do some thinking in peace and quiet .
  • Clive
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eg There are just some things that sometimes worry me about us as time goes on. I'll tell you why, but I need to take my eyes off of the computer screen now and do some thinking in peace and quiet.

Clive

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Perfect Strangeroff of

The second word is superfluous and a common mistake.

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