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Lcchang Posted 18 years ago
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A short writing, please correct it.

The Taiwanese students' nearsightedness problem has been getting extremely worse. A lot of school kids wear either glasses or contact lenses. It derives from the fact that students have overused their eyes while using computers, reading or watching TV. If they rest their eyes more often than not, the problem should be eased.
  

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The problem of nearsightedness in Taiwanese students is worsening . Many school children wear glasses or contact lenses , primarily because they have strained their eyes using computers, reading , or watching TV. If they rest their eyes more often, the problem should be eased.

  • The problem of nearsightedness in Taiwanese students is worsening .
  • Many school children wear glasses or contact lenses , primarily because they have strained their eyes using computers, reading , or watching TV.
  • If they rest their eyes more often, the problem should be eased.
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The problem of nearsightedness in Taiwanese students is worsening. Many school children wear glasses or contact lenses, primarily because they have strained their eyes using computers, reading, or watching TV. If they rest their eyes more often, the problem should be eased.

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