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Case Assigner Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A short story

0Hi, would be nice if you comment on this short story... Especially if there are any grammar mistakes or whatever.... 02br
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01i00A man enters a pub, goes straight to the bar and sits down on a chair. The guest´s name is Dan. The barkeeper is cleaning a glass, after having polished it he puts it aside and comes towards Dan. He has a nameplate on his shirt that says that his name is Deidre. A hand is being offered. Handshake. Dan and Deidre seem to be good friends….02i02br
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00Barkeeper: Is there anything you would like to drink?02br
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00Guest: ( 01i00with a smile on his face02i00 ) Hey, come on, you know I am German.02br
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00Barkeeper: Well, not all of them are German. ( 01i00Here, the barkeeper stresses the notion 02i02br
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00Guest: You are right, especially those living at the Mosel. ( 01i00after a pause02i00 ) I prefer the spanish 02br
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00Barkeeper: I don´t care about both of them. I am Turkish.02br
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00Guest: As I already said, I am German.02br
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00Barkeeper: It would be different when you were English.02br
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00Guest: Or chinese.02br
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00Barkeeper: Yes, you are right…. ( 01i00looking at a beautiful woman standing at the entrance02i00 )02br
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00Guest: Well, I am German, hence I like the Bavarian.02br
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00Barkeeper: Ok, listen, I see your point, man. But what is it that you want to drink?02br
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00Guest: You do not listen to me my friend. As I already said, I am German.02br
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00Barkeeper: ( 01i00goes to the fridge at the corner, takes out a bottle of beer and puts it on the bar 02i02br
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01i00 right in front of the guest02i00 ) Here, my friend…. You are welcome.02br
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01i00The guest takes the bottle and examines it. Then he smiles. After he took a sip he stands up and welcomes the woman at the door….02i02br
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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Case Assigner12cite 10Hi, would be nice if you comment on this 11b 10short story12b 10... (11b 10not a story12b 10)12br 11h2 12h2 11h2 10 11u 10Highly relevant12u 12h2 11i 10A man enters a pub, goes straight to the bar and sits down on a chair. The guest´s name is Dan.

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  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Case Assigner12cite 10Hi, would be nice if you comment on this 11b 10short story12b 10...
  • (11b 10not a story12b 10)12br 11h2 12h2 11h2 10 11u 10Highly relevant12u 12h2 11i 10A man enters a pub, goes straight to the bar and sits down on a chair.
  • The guest´s name is Dan.
  • The barkeeper is cleaning a glass, after having polished it he puts it aside and 11b 10comes12b 10 towards Dan.
  • He has a nameplate on his shirt that says that his name is Deidre.
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01cite10Case Assigner12cite11i10He has a nameplate on his shirt that says 11font11del10that12del12font10 his name is Deidre.12i12blockquote
10I would rather write: 01i00He has got a nameplate on his shirt where you can read his n
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0 Well, I am not sure either... can someone please comment on this problem. A friend of mine told me that it must be written with capital letters. I am very unsure about that.0-
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01cite10Case Assigner12cite10Well, I am not sure either... can someone please comment on this problem. A friend of mine told me that it must be written with capital letters. I am very unsure about that.12br
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10You are quite right. But you didn't write it in your short story with capital letters.0
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0 Ohhh ****, sorry.... Yes, you are right. I was somehow confused. I thought I had written it with a capital letter. Sorry. 0-
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01cite10Case Assigner12cite10Ohhh ****, sorry.... Yes, you are right. I was somehow confused. I thought I had written it with a capital letter. Sorry. 12br
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10No problem. You are welcome!0-
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Thank you for helping me with my mistakes....
I have recognized that a lot of people ( at least in my surroundings ) do not understand this short story. They completely misinterpret it. What is it that you think the story is about?

ps: This story is an experiment....
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