a short sad story of a little angel...

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She woke up and all that around her was darkness. She could see nothing. The little 6 years old girl. 'Where am I?', She wondered. She looked around and saw a body thrown on the floor a little far away from her. The body had a tiny gleam emitting from it. She then realized that the body was hers. She exclaimed, ' What is going on? How can I be here and there at the same time?'.

Slowly and hesitantly she walked towards the body and tried to touch it but she couldn't. She was shocked as her tiny hollow hand went through the body and she could not feel it.

She crawled next to the body and tried to remember: ' I was sitting on my bed playing with my dolls', she said that as she smiled remembering playing with her dolls. 'Jessy the blonde doll was inviting Maya the black-eyed to a tea party', she continued, 'and then...then I heard my mom screaming, I rushed downstairs and I saw him, yes I did, my mom's husband, he was violently beating and thrashing my mother, it was a usual scene, and I remember him saying: ' give me money, you piece of sh*t', and my mom yelled back trying to struggle her way out of his firm grip: 'I won't give you anything, you will spend it on drinking and prostitutes, leave me alone, I hate you'. He shouted, ' I am not asking for your love, I am asking for your money'. At that moment, while he was abusing my mother, I ran towards them and tried to push him away from my mom, I tried to rescue her from his merciless abusing. Then...then...Oh I do not remember'.

The little girl could not remember what happened afterwards, her memory failed her because she was dead. That monster had grabbed and thrown her away as she was trying to help her mother and her head was crushed violently against the table. She cried and cried because she could not remember. Then, two smiling angels approached her and said: ' Come on, do not cry little child, we will play together and become your friends.'. 'Where am I?', she asked. 'You are in your new world, a world full of peace, happiness and joy where hate, anger, fear, and tears have no place'. They replied, 'Come with us and you will be the queen of the world of virtue.'.