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LuzMaria Posted 12 years ago
Science & IT

a short part of my dissertation

Please, check this part of my work: "The aim of this work (dissertation) is to discuss the dialogue of cultures between Spain and China.
The first chapter discusses the first contacts between the Spanish and the Chinese.
The second chapter contains the analysis of existing textbooks of Spanish language for Chinese students.
We are showing whether modern textbooks present the dialogue of the cultures and the way they do it.
The third chapter contains our recommendations: texts and attached papers which present the dialogue of cultures between Spain and China".
  

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Hello, LuzMaria—and welcome to English Forums. The first rule of revision is to refine by eliminating unnecessary verbosity: This dissertation discusses the dialogue of cultures between Spain and China. The first chapter discusses their initial contacts.

  • Hello, LuzMaria—and welcome to English Forums.
  • The first rule of revision is to refine by eliminating unnecessary verbosity: This dissertation discusses the dialogue of cultures between Spain and China.
  • The first chapter discusses their initial contacts.
  • The second chapter analyzes existing Spanish language textbooks for Chinese students, and we discuss whether and how modern textbooks present this dialogue of cultures.
  • The third chapter contains our recommendations for texts and attached papers which effectively present this dialogue.
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Hello, LuzMaria—and welcome to English Forums.

The first rule of revision is to refine by eliminating unnecessary verbosity:

This dissertation discusses the dialogue of cultures between Spain and China. The first chapter discusses their initial contacts. The second chapter analyzes existing Spanish language textbooks for Chinese students, and we discuss whether and how modern
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Thank you so very much!!!!!!

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