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Klavier Posted 19 years ago
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Hello.
I have translated this from Spanish, and I'd like to know if there are any mistakes in it:
Loved Universal Mother, who are in heaven and on earth, unify our love to your love, give us your strenght, your energy, day by day, so that we bring to life the pillars, today, tomorrow and in the moment when our being abandons its flesh and be freed from this body.
Mother, that your infinite love, free us from the wheel of reincarnations we are joined to because of our wrong walking in life, we ask you and pray you for our salvation and send us the vehicle that will take us to the Light, a place we promise to care for, respect and love for ever.
Thank you Mother for all you have given us in the past, thank you for all you give us in the present time and thank you for all you will give us in the future.
I have translated this from Spanish, and I'd like to know if there are any mistakes in it:
Loved Universal Mother, who are in heaven and on earth, unify our love to your love, give us your strenght, your energy, day by day, so that we bring to life the pillars, today, tomorrow and in the moment when our being abandons its flesh and be freed from this body.
Mother, that your infinite love, free us from the wheel of reincarnations we are joined to because of our wrong walking in life, we ask you and pray you for our salvation and send us the vehicle that will take us to the Light, a place we promise to care for, respect and love for ever.
Thank you Mother for all you have given us in the past, thank you for all you give us in the present time and thank you for all you will give us in the future.
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Latin Hello. ] , today, tomorrow and in the moment when our being abandons its flesh and is freed from the body. Mother, that may your infinite lo ve f ree us from the wheel of reincarnations we are joined to because of our wrong walking doing in lif e.
- Latin Hello.
- ] , today, tomorrow and in the moment when our being abandons its flesh and is freed from the body.
- Mother, that may your infinite lo ve f ree us from the wheel of reincarnations we are joined to because of our wrong walking doing in lif e.
- W e ask you and pray you [omit "you"] for our salvation and send us the vehicle that will take us to the Light, a place we promise to care for, respect and love for ever.
- Thank you , Mother , for all you have given us in the past, thank you for all you give us in the present and thank you for all you will give us in the future.
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LatinHello.
I have translated this from Spanish, and I'd like to know if there are any mistakes in it:
Loved Beloved Universal Mother, who are [single subject = singular verb] in heaven and on earth,
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Thanks. But I'm confused here,
who are [single subject = singular verb]
Is it who is or who are?
About the pillars, I don't know, the original sentence is
...para que los pilares los hagamos vida en el hoy.
Well, it doesn't make full sense either.
who are [single subject = singular verb]
Is it who is or who are?
About the pillars, I don't know, the original sentence is
...para que los pilares los hagamos vida en el hoy.
Well, it doesn't make full sense either.
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LatinThanks. But I'm confused here,
who are [single subject = singular verb] (What Feebs is saying is that it should be who is.)
Is it who is or who are?
About the pillars, I don't know, the original sentence is
...para que los pilares los
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Yesterday my supervisor fill up my yearly appraisal form and I have to say you that I am totally disagree/unsatisfied/disappointed with this procedure, in whole year I never compromise with work but again and again why I have to compromise with company’s benefits??? Why I have to complain top level always? I explain my every point with my respective managers but I am f
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Hi,
You need to divide this into a number of shorter sentences, each starting with a capital letter and ending with a period.
Plase do that, and then repost it so that we can offer you more comments.
Best wishes, Clive
You need to divide this into a number of shorter sentences, each starting with a capital letter and ending with a period.
Plase do that, and then repost it so that we can offer you more comments.
Best wishes, Clive
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