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Perfect Stranger Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A short paragraph abt a company - can you just have a look?

Dear All,

Would you be so kind and point out to expressions/phrases/sentences that don't sound natural or native like? I'm not asking you to correct it, merely point out what doesn't sound good.

Our enterprise's business scope includes multilevel investment. Apart from many domestic and international projects that have been financed directly by our enterprise, there are many civil engineering undertakings that our company has financed in cooperation with various Chinese banks. We have completed successfully a great number of construction projects, particularly in overseas markets. Our time-honored achievements are reflected in our excellent reputation which attracts many investors both from local as well as overseas markets. We aim at and seek smooth and fruitful cooperation with any partners who wish to rely on our professional approach and advantageous, well-established relations our company has with many Chinese financial institutions . We are looking forward to step into mutually beneficial, win-win ventures based on reciprocal cooperation.

Thanks
  
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