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I come from Viet Nam. My homework is talk about jobs of students .

In my country , students have two options to find a job : one is part-time job and one is summer job . They work part-time because they are in term time . In the summer holidays, they will work full time because their holidays last 3 months . There are many jobs for students choose such as shop assistant in the shops , cinema staffs in the cinemas , waiters or waitress in the top-notch restaurants , etc... . Some students even work as volunteers . Maybe they don't have well paid but they feel happy . My friends is bitten by the travel bug so last summer , she worked in a agency travel . She said :" I was very happy because I could go to the destinations I loved . Also , I earned money for the next term ". Students work these jobs don't just earn money . On one other hand , they can develop languages skills , get work experience and make friends . And I think , the most important reason is that they choose to work industriously instead of being a couch potato .

Thank you for reading my post . Please help me repair my mistake . Love you from VietNam.